A Family for Christmas By Michelle Zimmerman
A Family for Christmas kindle books
The first two illustrations are three dimensional digital renditions of an adorable puppy Then we have a cartoon illustration a drawing colored in shades of pink The rest of the book is three dimensional digital illustrations similar to the first ones of the puppy Why the drawing of a woman and her poodle in a completely different style was inserted in the middle is a mystery to me These are obviously illustrations taken from a site and not made specifically for the book Most illustrations were quite bare. A Family for Christmas epub.pub As a picture book the text is far far too wordy It may have suited a magazine Much of the text is unnecessary and should be weeded out The author would do well to research appropriate word counts for picture books. A Family for Christmas epub.pub One place to cut is unnecessary adverbs and explanations For example The puppy wagged its tail excitedly Excitedly is unnecessary Alex raised his eyebrows quizzically Quizzically is unnecessary His mother s mouth fell open in surprise In surprise is unnecessary Writers need to limit possibly even completely eliminate adverbs and let the verbs speak for themselves. A family for christmas 2023 The story itself is predictable and needs suspense and originality As well the last two or three pages could be cut completely We only need one instance of the puppy and Alex being happy together to understand that this turned into a wonderful Christmas after all Kindle Edition
| A Family for Christmas By Michelle Zimmerman |
| English |
| 17 |
| Kindle Edition |
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